Juventud
Una lágrima resbala
por mis ojos, y al caer
veo en ella una esperanza
que acaba de perecer...
Cada problema una lágrima
cada lágrima – un dolor
cada dolor - un pétalo
cae de mi vida en flor.
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Escribí esto con 13 años... y hoy tengo 48... sin embargo, esa niña aún sigue conmigo.
Qué creen que sentía en ese momento, o qué intentaba expresar? Comentarios bienvenidos.   Comments
How could you understand it ?
 I was 13 years when I wrote that... the age of being hopelessly in love, and where everything seems to be forever, or a huge tragedy. I was specially sensitive then (not that I am not now  ) but then...I suffered like hell with everything I just joined a Club in Spanish, The Written Word Club, so I might be uploading several of my writings and poetries from my youth  I am FINE and HAPPY now !!!      -- The  needs more Smiles against Hate !  en ese texto hablas sobre la esperanza, cuando a pierdes lloras, y cada lagrima te recuerda que fue ella. la maldita esperanza
 tengo escritos parecidos a ese cuando tenia tu edad deberias unirte al club de palabras  yo me acabo de unir asi mas gente nos leera deberias escribri mas de tus pensamientos pasados que yo tambien tengo mas, es increible leer de nuevo lo que antes escribimos aca esta el club [link] -- Comissions> [link] Ecchi-> [link] For the Bishonen see in my journal Es que lo subí para el club !!!
 Hoy leí noticias y vi que estaba, y me apasionó la idea. Tengo alguna recopilación... y si me pusiera a escribir no subo más fotos !! Creo que todo dependerá de cómo evolucione el club... del ambiente y del tipo de aportes que vayan apareciendo. Ojalá que funcione bien, sería tan positivo e interesante! -- The needs more Smiles against Hate !   The only words I understand is: 'Comentarios bienvenidos.'  I'm sure this wouldn't translate well to english, so don't worry. Just know I'm glad you are posting some writing!  I really like your authors tag--I haven't been able to figure out how to do that trick yet (it's been almost 3 years  )--  Be JOYOUS!!! Sieze a friend and lick 'em! Your words capture so well the passionate despair and hope of youth. They also sound beautiful read aloud
Gracias!   Que lindo!
 -- Write on me...   Great poem....and I love spanish language...so romantic...
Mui linda poesia...  You do understand it ! ???
 Thank you for your nice words... I was so young... everything seems so hard and difficult when one "starts" facing the world... -- The needs more Smiles against Hate ! |
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